Haha
Very funny. Little random humor like this is just the kind of thing that I like. ;) I'm not sure if it was my computer, or what, but the music seems to cut out when the whale starts spinning around. (Towards the end of the loop)
The art was pretty darn good, if it were longer I would have given you a much higher score. :)
I could certainly see this fitting into a collab quite nicely, too bad you were too late. :P
Good work, man!
Awh thanks man, much appriciated. I think it was your computer because it runs fine for me, its cool that it loops sorta cause it wasnt supposed to. :P
I was happy for the most part with the art, but i thought the building didnt quite fit in. Ah well. :)
Very Nice
I liked this a lot. Your drawings were fairly good; the choice of music and way you presented the guy just sitting there thinking under a tree beneath the stars really gave it such a deep, meaningful and mystical feel.
I kind of interpreted the two meeting as almost a reunion. Like the girl was accepting him back again, or something. -Just the feeling that I got anyways. :P
The only criticism I have is the animation seemed to be a tad bit rough in spots. (Certainly not BAD as you stated! XP) It was certainly nothing to scoff at! This was a VERY good fist submission! Great work!
:D ty!
I will get better with the time, and maybe a remake of this flsh....
just wait like... 1 year xD (joking )
Another Quality Flash
haha, very good once again. If your intention was to make a little something good for us viewers until the next episode, you certainly accomplished that. :P
The animation and humor were just as good as the last one I watched. I loved the dusty old-school instructional video theme. Having it in black in white really gave it the look like it was made in your father's generation. (You just needed the old school beeping 3. 2. 0. countdown thing in the beginning and it would have been perfect!) XP
Overall, it was another outstanding animation, from what I've seen you've got to be one of the more underrated flash artists on Newgrounds...Quality stuff, man. I can't wait for the next episode. :)
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Once I make more movies, I think I'll get more popularity. Thanks. Also, I did almost make a countdown thing but I ran out of time. :)
Great
Wow, the fact that this only has 15 reviews is a major injustice. This was awesome, to put it bluntly. Between the quality of the drawings and audio, the smoothness of the animation, and just the general way you presented this flash made me feel like I was watching a cartoon on tv!
The humor was also great, it was present throughout the entire flash and really kept me laughing.
Overall, I really couldn't find any spots of this that were lacking. Everything was top-notch, funny, and it was a good length. -One of the better movies on Newgrounds, that's for certain; I'll be sure to check out your other episodes. :) -Great work!
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Cool
It was different. I've personally never seen choppy frame by frame using pictures like this on Newgrounds. It's a really cool style, I thought it had a really "busy", fast-paced feel to it. My only criticism is that it was kinda on the short side. But overall a cool little project. -Neat stuff, man, good job.
By the way, what kind of food was that at the end? It looked deep fried whatever it was. Yum yum :D
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Fish is on the top, with black puddings on the bottom, hamburgers (I think) on the bottom left and a pie disappearing off to the right.
Thanks for the review!
A Lot Like The First
As with the first, the electronic voice was too fast and hard to understand. I'm going to find myself stating a lot of the points I did when reviewing your other movie because the flaws I found are identical. My best advice to you would be slowing the whole thing down, both visually and with the audio. Also try animating a little bit more of this story opposed to it being largely a slideshow of pictures. Continue to put forth effort into your work, and don't be afraid to mix things up a bit and try new ideas.
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Yeah, I tried that with WA 3 but People still didn't like it. I Might go back to the old way though.
Needs Work
Well, the images were poorly drawn, and there was a lack of animation that made it more like a slideshow than a flash. The audio was way too fast which made it hard to understand the narrator, and in turn hard to gain any humor from the flash.
I assume that many of the aspects of this flash you intended, (such as the very fast voice) for comedic value, but it didn't hit the spot for me. I would try just slowing the whole thing down a bit and coming up with some good jokes and working on comedic timing. This would really spice it up and give viewers a laugh. Also adding some more animation would hurt, either.
I hate to be so critical without giving much positive feedback, but I just found it really hard to get into/understand this movie. I hope my suggestions helped a little or gave you some ideas.
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Yeah, But hey it was off to a good start. I mean at least it wasn't a crappy sprite mario movie huh?
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