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[Jason Needs A Girlfriend]

No..

This was horrid. The lyrics were incredibly annoying and pointlessly vulgar. The guitar may have been the only redeeming thing here, but that might be a stretch. You certainly did "whore out" E5 in song, you are right there. ;)
I would get rid of the awful vocals and put in some drums, as a start.
Try putting some more effort into your music in the future.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Thats the plan.

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3]

Meh

The double bass rolls really don't go with the pace of the song at all, though it did sound a bit better when the snare came in.
The lyrics got quite annoying after a while. I think it would have sounded good for an intro, but it kept going and got a bit too repetitive for my taste.
Overall, I'd say that this song has much more potential than the two you submitted last week. I'm sure if you keep at it you'll be able to come up with some pretty cool heavy metal stuff. :)

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KlanMaster911 responds:

I already have some cool metal stuff.I just dont post it so the people here can steal it.

[(_RGH_) Abyss (Dark Pico)]

Pretty Nice

The rhythm really worked for me pretty well, even though it did get a bit samey after a while. You really mixed the lead stuff up enough to the point where it didn't get stale at all.
This song really had a lot of different sounds going on throughout the corse of the track, but it all sounded really good together.
Though this wasn't at all slow, it did tend to drag on a bit towards the end of the track. I think adding a solo over that percussion-y part at around 3:44 would sound really nice. That would of course mean extending the song a bit, but I think it would do this some good. ;p
Overall, you've got a good tune here, though. I enjoyed listening.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

Im glad you liked it

[(_RGH_) Aero(on a plane) ".(."]

Not Bad

I loved how the drums built up on that slow melody in the intro. The strings had such an uplifting and satisfying sound in the first part of the song. That really stood out to me.
The second half seems to be a little on the dull side opposed to the first. I really liked the intro, and how it flowed into the main part of the song. I really think you could have extended that, then added a small quiet interlude piece in there along the lines of what the whole second half of the song sounded like.
Overall, this has got some potential. Keep up the good work.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

i will do my best

[[TMM43] Breathe]

Great

This has a really thick, hazy sound, especially in the beginning. The drums really played a huge roll in getting this song started. Just goes to show that hitting quarter notes on the bass drum can really add some good rhythm. Not everything needs to be complex all the time. :P
Speaking of rhythm, this tune had loads of it. Not only was the rhythm strong, but you managed to incorporate a few really interesting melodies here, which really kept the song interesting all the way through. The interlude in the middle was also a great change of pace.
This is really a good example of what a great trance track should have. -Good diverse melody, great effects and a strong beat. Great work.

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[(prev.) ChromoMiyx]

Nice Start

The melody was very quiet, but it got the job done. It had kind of a sad, "end of the world" kind of feel to it. Or at least I thought so, as it reminded me of the night of the final day in Majora's Mask. :P The percussion was quite good here, it really was the focal point of the song as there didn't seem to be a dominate rhythm over it.
The end sounded like you just stopped working on it right in the middle of the song! :P I would keep working on this. Add a really distinguishable lead to the song, and maybe a little solo thrown in there, too, and you'll have something pretty good. :)

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loogiesquared responds:

~Because it's a preview! =P

I'll take your review into consideration with the final project.

[<==Raining Rage==>]

Dark

This song was just brooding with this dark suspense, it just felt like SOMETHING was going to happen. 0.o I loved the rain effects, that made me think of a haunted house, or something of the like. The low notes and the melody used on the piano really emphasized the dark, evil sound.
I honestly think this sounds good the way it is, though it might be able to use another melody to mix things up a bit.
Overall this song is really rich, and really evoked a lot of imagery with me. Good work.

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DjCompass responds:

Thanks for the review ^^ I look forward to a time when i drag my lazy butt into re making this ^^

[<==Silver Strut==>]

Wow, Nice

The melody throughout this song really did "Strut", that's a good way to describe it. It was very upbeat and smooth the way it just rolled along throughout the track. "Suave", would describe it well. :P
The piano really seemed to share the lead quite nicely. Once the piano really came in at around 0:45 it really seemed like there were just two leads going at it at times. They mingled together quite nicely and made a pretty sweet sound.
Overall the melody as a whole was really rich and complex. A very fun listen. Nice job.

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DjCompass responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it ^^
Suave... nice word...

[/BBQ\ -- Once]

Yay!

This song really has a melody that just gets inside your head and makes you feel good. :D I can't describe it any better than that.
When the song thins out to just the piano and drums was a nice transition, but I think it would have served better if it were later in the song. I was like "noo!" when that awesome melody faded out. :P
I also think adding an upbeat solo to this would be a nice touch and really give it even more energy, if you could fit it in.
Overall, I'd say that you've got something really good here. It was a genuinely fun listen, keep up the good work!

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BBQSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review :D Yeah, I really try to make melodies that stay in your head so you will listen to the song again xD It's difficult and doesn't always work though...

[Fantasia Nocturne No.1]

Nice

I loved how the rhythm had such really had such a dark and ominous feel, that really stuck out to me. To be honest, I really liked how this was just largely the piano by itself. It's quite refreshing from all the busy sounding songs that are crowded with effects and such.
The song had a really unified theme and it sounded strong all the way through. I think this would have some room for some other melodies if you chose to go that route, but it really does sound fine the way it is now.
I really enjoy piano music and this was a real treat. A nice classical piece.

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sarias responds:

aw thanks im glad you liked it