Awful
It was horrid, to put it simply. This is not music to any degree and the words are barely possible to make out. How did you come to the decision to classify this as heavy metal?
Overall, I'd scrap this entirely and try to make a legitimate song instead. I know you can do much better than this.
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Not Good
This song was once again very strange. It lacked rhythm largely throughout the whole track and many of the sound effects were a bit on the unpleasant side to listen to.
That fuzzy guitar riff toward the beginning of the song was pretty cool. I would try building off of that.
Overall, this was very unorganized, it sounded like a lot of noise. I could hardly tell where it stared and where it ended. There were a couple redeeming bits to this that I think could be used as inspiration for another song. I would look into that.
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I have some better riffs I can dish out..
Hrm...
Very strange. It had a very deflated sound. Most of the song hardly had any musical quality to it, which really hinders in the critiquing process.
I think this is a good starting point for an interesting song. My best advice would be to try to make some melodies for this song. I could picture it being a very dark, slow tune if you worked at it.
Overall, I'd say it needs a of work. If you have any intentions of improving it, then making a main "theme" or melody would be the best place so start. Once you have a good riff, the rest just tends to follow.
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Guru Guru Would Be Proud :P
Ah boy, if I could only have nickle for every time I've heard this song over the years. :P I really enjoyed it. This song sounds really good on the piano, it sounded really nice all the way through.
My only criticism is that some of the changes you made later in the track sounded a bit forced, in my opinion. They really didn't flow with the overall feel of the song.
Overall it was a fun listen, though. A nice little twist to a real Zelda classic. Good work.
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Thanks :)
Well, I did those changes because I wanted it to sound a bit less monotone. It also, in my opinion, sounds nice... but we all have different opinions =)
Pretty Good
I really loved the raspy sound this had. It is really loud and rough and the beat is driving and powerful, just like a good dance track should be. Yet on the other hand, the soft piano stuff you mixed in was really nice, too. The melody overall sounded great and was quite catchy.
The intro was a bit repetitive, but between the drums coming in and some of the subtle melodies you added it didn't get at all stale in my opinion.
My only criticism is that interlude part that comes in at around 52 seconds seems to come in too early, breaking up the song a bit. It would have sounded a bit better if you made another hard, fuzzy melody before it slowed down.
The transition from that quiet part to the rest of the song is great, though. I just think it would sound better a bit later in the track.
Overall, I really enjoyed listening, good job on this.
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Yeah well, mainly i was trying to make Harddance. I think i did a decent job. Hard, Upbeat. The breakdown with the piano and pad was fun to make. I tried alot of different effects and such but in the end it would be too chaotic. lol so i deleted that.
Well, the intro sucks. I know. I've always been bad at making intro's and probably will be lol. I suspose i could make that part longer, where it all breaks off and such. Into a giant breakdown. But then again, i had no inspiration for such a think. I would really love to make one :D. I think you prefer longer tracks. With more motion and more slight hints of detail. This song is rushed and short. So that might explain something.
Thanks you liked it.
-firebolt-
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I love the windy sound, the beginning really gave me a strong image of wind gusting across the top of a quiet mountain top. Just thought I'd mention that. :P
The melody is very upbeat and well written to the point were it managed to stay interesting and fresh throughout the entire track.
The solo about 3/4 through the song was awesome. By far the best part of this song. It really had a shreddy feel to it, which is something that I LOVE to hear in a techno tune.
Overall an exciting track. The transitions were great and it was a good listen start to finish. I don't see any need for improvement here. Great work.
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Thanks for the review. That's awesome that you saw imagery in it. The wind was actually really easy to create, just white noise with some modulation. So it's pretty awesome when people tell me what they "see" And it's different imagery each time :D
Though I find it kind of hard to believe that you couldn't find any need for improvement :P I still listen to it obsessively looking for faults but I can't really find any. Somehow that bothers me lol... I'm a perfectionist and I'm always looking for something to fix.
Powerful
Wow, this is really impressive. That hard, driving melody really kicks some serious ass, to put it simply. :P I really do get an "industrial" feeling from this song, it just sounds so frantic and busy. You really accomplished that goal. That fat, staticy effect with the wah-wah was also an awesome touch, too by the way.
The whole song has a solid, unified theme. Nothing got old or stale at any point throughout the song. The interlude-type part where you slowed it down was a nice change of pace and it lead up to the ending quite nicely.
Overall, an awesome track. My second 10/10. Truly lived up to the expectations of your 100th song! Great work!
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Thanks, man! Great to hear that you liked it. Now the pressure's on to keep it up for submission 101 onwards. Maybe I could delete an old track and squeeze the 100th submission milestone for all it's worth for a second time. (lol jk)
Sounds Good
I really enjoyed this. The melody was quite funky and it really matched up well with the percussion. This long song really featured a ton of different sounds, but it managed to keep the same central feel throughout the whole track up until around 3:45. That transition seemed kind of abrupt and the whole song seemed to get so much lighter there, or something. It sounded good, but seemed slightly out of place in comparison to the rest of the song.
The track sounded really good, overall. I really enjoyed the listen.
Good work!
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hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.
i guess the 3:45 its the experimental ending , i have another version without that ending ill upload it one of these days, im glad the song end up being liked hehehe, glad th perc worked too cause took me a while to arrange it :D, thanks :D
Cool
This was a very exciting song. The clapping hands and the people cheering in the beginning was a cool feature, I really liked that.
The melodies in this song were very well written. I felt like I had listened to about three songs by the time it had ended, yet I didn't really hear any bad transitions, everything seemed to flow pretty well.
Overall this song was all over the place, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. :P Lots of different sounds and melodies really kept me interested throughout the whole track. I enjoyed listening, good work. :)
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hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.
Im glad u liked it:D, the main melody its made by my friend, the rest its created around that melody :D, well i noticed you liked the song overall. Im trilled u didnt mention the repetitiveness like all the others, well diferent opinions count too :D thank you very much :D
Kind Of Sad...
I really liked how this started out so quiet and slowly and built up power and melody throughout the song. It had a very dark, brooding feel. I wouldn't go as far as to call it evil-sounding, but I saw it as very serious and sad.
Overall, everything was put together very well in this tune. Nothing sounded out of place or off in any way. I could really see this being used in a cinema scene in a video game, or in a serious flash work. It would contribute greatly in that context as it sets a great mood, yet it fits into the background nicely without drawing too much attention.
Great job with this, I really enjoyed listening.
And be sure to request your 100th with us, too! :D
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Thanks, man. Personally, I love the music in videogames nowdays, a cutscene has huge emphasis on the music to draw out the emotion.
Cheers.
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